Whoa, totally wasn’t expecting that last part. I like how the story went from an orange, to hair, to a grenade. That was cool.
Wow, that last paragraph really was a twist! I had begun to imagine something along the lines that she had been kidnapped/imprisoned…what a surprise! The imagery is wonderful, though – gorgeous descriptions, and the metaphors and all that are fantastic. I’d love to read some sort of backstory on this =)
Wow, that last paragraph really was a twist! I had begun to imagine something along the lines that she had been kidnapped/imprisoned…what a surprise!
The imagery is wonderful, though – gorgeous descriptions, and the metaphors and all that are fantastic.
I’d love to read some sort of backstory on this =)
Thanks! Dang, how do you do dashes without it turning into strikethru? Kells: you could write one….
Thanks!
Dang, how do you do dashes without it turning into strikethru?
Kells: you could write one….
I liked the quick shift from thoughtful to throwing a grenade with a little stream-of-consciousness transition in the middle.LoA
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