Hehe very nice. People are people, even dead. The charachter trys to act tough, but you can still sense her apprehension.
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L-O-Freaking-L! I loved it. You owe me a new keyboard Doctor. A cheeky ghost, an increasingly pissed off teenager, brilliant punchline… It’s got it all :)
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Great conversation.

Wonderful dialogue.
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Fantastic dialogue.

This is great Kevin Smith-y humor, minus the F-bombs! Loved it!!

ha ha, “airy” puns.
Yeah, what they said. Ditto.
Although the jump from an eternal question to “are we related?” threw me.
I’m tired, I guess. :)
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A good point, Elsha. My thinking on his thinking was that this dark fate was an inevitable thing unless he took drastic action during this one moment of clarity. Or he’s insane and just picked the wrong little voice to listen to. You decide. Thanks to everyone for all the great comments throughout this series!

Wow, I’m retarded. Meant to put this comment on a different ficlet. Here, yep, total jump. I blame the character limit.

woooow. haha. Love the dialoge THX !
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Nice conversation, very funny “airy” joke, and even funnier: a perverted ghost. I loved this.

I loved your use of the word “noncorporal.” That was nice. Good dialogue as well, of course.
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