I like the way he always seemed to know where the bombs would drop. Nicely done.

Great background, making it sound both romantic at the time and menacing in hindsight. And a really nice whip back to the moment after the flashback.
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That would be really scary. Like Russell said, it was funny how he always knew where they were. This is great!

This is tense. It really makes me feel for Marjorie, and your transition back to the present at the end is very nice.