Great sequel! That’s exactly the kind of thing I was going for. You’ve written both characters (or both of the same character…) very convincingly – the last couple of lines in particular are brilliant.

Thank you kindly. It was my first attempt and first time here. Appreciate the kind words.

Great sequel. That was funny. I mean, we all get frustrated with ourselves from time to time, but this is a new twist on the feeling.
LoA

Enjoyed the sequel, especially the ending. Great job!

Very real moments here.

Seems I forgot the stars…

What a great tie to the prequel!