The duality of Movement was a bit too much.

A very human way of responding to the stress of resisting the vile corporation. I love the detail about the accusation of a dying man.

I can recall being in the position of having to make the switch from sitting to hovering over a stall toilet, and I gotta admit you captured and described the scene really well. Very nice.

Um, that was just sick, in every sense of the word. Definite points for…creativity.

Odd path for this story to take, but I do find toilet humor to be, uh… humorous. I do think that by not capitalizing The Movement in your final paragraph that you kind of left open the possibility for a sequel that strays wildly from the original with a living, breathing movement escaping its porcelain captor to overthrow the Corporation, Inc.
Five stars for the toilet humor.

Oh please, HighOnPoker and PyroPunk 51 I am sorry to say but you guys are wusses. If you were in situation of the guy in the story you would of done the same. Long live the movement, I like that line. It just puts his decision down firm.
LoA

Have to side with Blusparrow on this one. Even without the weight of a megalomaniacal corporation on my shoulders, I’ve suffered the same gut wrenching response when accosted by such an awful experience (and just this week even).

Great insight and an interesting read! As always, very very awesome! Have a great weekend and thanks for contributing the sequel. I need to read the Stella Star series & see what krazy stuff’s goin’ on there now…. Change of pace…