ha, ha, really funny, loved the tiwst ending, . waht a brat.

Ok, I LOL , reaally I did. “wanna make it to six?” hysterical.

hahaha this IS really funny! good job!

I loved the details like what he thought was a King Arthurian Excaliber sword, that ended up looking like a hot dog. At “You wanna make it to six?,â€? the really mad clown said I started chuckling. But at _I did the best I could dearâ€?, said his mother, “now let your dad alone to make the ballon animals and have some cake” I laughed out loud. Great funny twist I wasn’t expecting. That kid really is a menace. Great premise. I loved it!

I agree with between space.. very humorous story. I like the interaction between the kid and the “clown” very witty and entertaining. This one has a good shot at first place..

hahahahahaha, really really great and funny ficlet.

Funny, but a bit too much like a joke I heard a long time ago.

Great idea to have it be his dad…especially with the “you wanna make it to six?” line. That was my favorite.

I hope they’re saving up for that kid’s therapy fund.

Now I’m going to have a visual all day of a clown with one of those big red noses with a balloon which looks like a hot dog, and a scowl on with a little boy with a frown. That’s funny.

okay, i have to admit, when i read the beginning and middle, i thought it was a little stupid. but, by the time i got to the end, i was laughing out loud!! that is SOO funny!!!!

LoA