You set the tone for a very tranquil scene quite well through your description and Jason’s actions and thoughts. Reading it, I felt as though I was sitting there next to him. I could picture vividly the sunset you describe.

Wow, I liked this a lot. Your descriptions are beautiful, and I absolutely love the revelation of his past in how he takes the photos. That was brilliant. My only minor criticism is a bit of grammar, but it may just be my ignorance on the subject and terms of photography. Shouldn’t it be ”…checked that he was seated comfortably…” as opposed to using “sat”?

Sorry, meant to rate this, also.

Ok, apparently my rating is not showing up with the comments, but I gave it five stars.