I really like this! The last line is just perfect. =)
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Ya, the end kind of bundles it all together. Awesome job Band Baby! I can totally relate to this!
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Agree with Ana Cristina and thanks for entering!

I think this something we all can relate to. You did a great job at connecting with the reader. And although I love the last line, I really love the, “I am broken.” I don’t really know why though.

Awesome! It conveys your desires, frustrations, and philosophy on life. It is you!