The flow of your dialog is so good, and that last line is pure gold.

Ooh, I remember that book. I hated it. But it fits really well here in their back and forth. Man I hated that book.

I like your story’s dialogue. I guess I will never read that book, the ficlet reviews are not so so good!

You got sequel! Sorry this took me so long.

love the last line..so typical jameson

Jameson’s probably one of the wittiest characters on ficlets.

It’s amazing how you keep coming up with punny lines for him to say!