Dude you may say you’re not as good of a writer as me, but i say ur AMAZING ! U can keep up a pretty suspenseful and interesting story. Keep going man!

I agree with Bartimaeus. You’re a great writer. So keep going. Um, man.

It’s incredibly difficult to maintain intrigue and suspense over the course of a series and you have done it! So, what I read in the previous installment was not a threat but a reward? I like that, the warrior wishing for peace.