creepy keep going! i had the feeling something like this was going to happen! from a couple parts ago

Huh? What’s going to happen now? Really suspenseful, nice job.
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Ok. That is just freaky! Throw wonderball out the window!

Oh dear. That’s really all I have to say.

LOL @ Tears’s comment because I feel the same way. I like the vaguely humorous, (maybe I just have a black sense of humor, I don’t know, but I found it kind of funny) completely ominous last line, THX . I can’t wait to read the next installment!

oh my.. will it explode? Can’t wait for a sequel..
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the ending was pretty funny.. For some reason it reminded me of the ouja board. Im picking up on some zathura like traits in this story. pretty cool!

wow… love the last line…
CHUNK IT OUT THE WINDOW !!!!

I myself had been wondering if Wonderball was truly evil or not. The last line answers that resoundingly.

Great sequel with a fantastically dark and revealing final line.

whoa, so creepy. its like darkly comic, that last line. it sort if reminds me of Chuckie or someting.

Wow, what an evil little thing.
Amazing story.
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haha, that thing is scarrrrryyyy!!!

DUDE . OMG. THAT THING IS SOOO SCARY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
soooooo fricking intense!!!!
HOLY CRAP !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oh.. wow. thats creepy, I’m freaked out right now.
wow…

Creepy, and well-written. The description of the bloodshot eyes is unsettling.