Ooh, you’ve got everybody twisting and turning here, from Sassy to Prandi! Woo-frickin-hoo! Really a nice job orchestrating everyone and everything to this point.

Wow. I’ve read the entire story so far, and this is pure genius. I’ve waited for updates every day, and every new sequel is better and better. Nice twists so far. It’s almost as if I’ve already read the ending due to all the detail

I concur with THX , they’re all twisting and turning… It’s incredible! And I love the description of Jameson’s look and what it does to Prandi.

I really, really love this. I ditto all the above.
LoA

I echo my fellow ficleteers on this one love the story love the details and the personifications. Phew thats a big word. I think its funny how thier all getting sick.. What exaclty was in those fajitias? Oh wait thier drunk nm. Prandi better go check on Becca.. Shes probably praying to the porcilian god.

Your sequel has arrived!

wow…everything has suddenly gone backwards. I agree with what everyone else has said so far.

I LOVE this series!!! Omg He needs to be with BECCA !!!!