I love the line at the end of the opening pgh, “This was bad.” Talk about an understatement!
I also like how the sentences vary throughout this piece, some longer and more descriptive, allowing the reader to visualize the scene, others cut and dried, adding to the immediacy of it.

Another awesome entry. A great, subtle hint of humor mixed in with the tense moment describing the seven guns and his reasons for not carrying them.
Apparently though, you are, in fact, human. This “tried so hard not be defined” needs a “to” before or after “not.”

This thing is playing out brilliantly. I love how you concluded it and his thought process behind only bringing one gun so as not to be defined by his physicality.

ay Dios mio, this thing is freakin awesome! I’m sucked into this thing like dust in a vaccuum!

That last line was great, you have a talent at describing things that happen without actually having to outright mention them. It’s as though you write around an action, if that makes sense?

great addition to this series.

A real gun toter this guy.. fun read as usual.

i like the way the variables don’t include the 7 guns, or rather minus 7 guns… nicely done.

The shot (most always) does it. Seven guns? The good Agent outdoes me by far! My kind of story!!!