Comments on The orphanage 5 by Twitch

Twitch

PLEASE COMMENT !
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:41:54.
Twitch

PLEASE COMMENT !
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:41:54.
Morgo

I love the suspense created in this ficlet. Cant wait to read more!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:41:54.
sunshine_loves_moon

like the suspense tooo.
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:41:54.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

some spelling and grammar errors, (she and Lucas, not her) and (not knowing exactly what to do)
but otherwise, great suspense!
- Posted 2009-01-12 04:41:54.