Oddly enough, I thought just the other day about how there ought to be a prequel to this story. Thanks for not making me do it. : ) This is kind of what I envisioned, too – it’s a specific enough birth of the Wonderball, but still, what the hell’s going on? Nice.

Excellent – this allows us to see the beginning of this not-so-innocent toy, and it gives the reader just enough information to want to keep reading and find out more. One small correction – the word “it’s” in the second line doesn’t need the apostrophe.