The last paragraph is very well written. Its cool how everytime I read on, it like pieces together the puzzle of this Backwards Challenge.

You’ve weaved this story together very well. Everything seems to be falling into place as the mystery unfolds in reverse. It’s quite awesome.
I’ve got two notes for you on this one. I think it should be ” if you only knew how dangerous,” and I’d go with “[a]t first, he didn’t recognize me.” He does know her, he just doesn’t realize it. Does that make sense? Saying he doesn’t know her is kind of a lie. Or is that just me?

You’re right. I didn’t want to write “recognize” so as to not overuse the word, but I’ll tweak it. Thanks!

It was like watching film develop. The darkness receding, revealing the truth. That last paragraph, in particular, was fantastic. Also, I love the blue bathrobe and matching slippers the guy was wearing.

This definatly is way more intersting because it’s backwards =]