Wow! that ending really was a buzz kill. I love the Flatulent Fricative .. very funny bit there.. You had us enchanted by a west coast sunset.. and then poor Jason has that lovely lil moment.. Good job! Funny ending! Fits the challenge perfectly!

at least they are outside!

Very funny. I agree completely with Sarah’s comment – it was perfect, until …

well, he was relaxed! LOL !

Poor girl! XD That is definitely a ‘ruined moment’! Everything is sparkling with perfection….and then dun dun DUN ! Thanks for entering. : )

oh wow.. that would totally suck! poor girl..
LoA

She should have expected it after he ordered the chili-cheese and broccoli omelette for dinner, and washed that down with a couple pints of Guiness. Good times.

“Giddy to giggles”, “Flatulent Fricative” were just two of the descriptions I loved in this one. Great entry. That would certainly ruin the moment, or so I’ve heard.

@John: hahahah.. that’s hilarious..
MMmmmmm Guinness!!!

@TBS: Thanks man!

Ah, that was great!

Like TBS said, the alliterations, intentional or not, were great.