Wow! Super! Holy shit that was awesome!
I don’t have the same disinclination for repeating myself as your brother. So I feel free to use those words at will.
Should it be “Not likely, I though. On either count?” It’ll throw you off by one character though. You could then change it to “kind of nasties” and “My thumb stabbed down on the switch.” That would even you back out I think.

Solid advice as usual, John. I did some juggling.

Holy shit that was awesome.

Oh…and to Hell with you, John Perkins! You blew it up! You maniac!!!

hahaha

That made me laugh so loud when I saw that comment.

Holy shit that was awesome.

Oh…and to Hell with you, John Perkins! You blew it up! You maniac!!!

hahaha

That made me laugh so loud when I saw that comment.

sorry…load problem…refresh…double post.

I guess it’s a tripple post now…but i need to get the stars in there.

Ok, so I’ll say it… wow!
Great pace, great gotcha at the end, great ficlet.
Write more… now! ;)