Simple yet it gets the message across. I’d like to hear this set to music.

Thanks! It would be a good song!
LoA

Thanks! It would be a good song!
LoA

In the second stanza it should probably be “live my life,” not “live my live.” But overall your poem flows very well and it was a pleasure to read it.

Thanks! Also thanks for pointing that out in the 2nd paragraph!
LoA

This is really good! I can really relate…you know that. And you know who about, lol. Great job!