I’m going to New York this weekend, and now I’m going to have to take taxis instead of the subway, after reading this. Great use of the “I smell a winner” line.

Nice, and good point brought out to the creeper.

I’ve been away awhile, and I see you’ve elevated your game! Man, the more you write, the better you get. My wife’s uncle from New York is over right now. He read this and agreed with me that you have a certain writing flair that comes natural. Awesome!

Brilliant as usual!!

_Such blithe obliviousness is actually an acquired skill for life in the city.

The man flashed a slightly more devilish grin, “But I still smell a winner_

Super-Creepy… I love it.

okay, I’m getting off at the next stop if he doesn’t! What exactly is he smelling, I wonder? LOL ! What a weirdo! Thanks for entering, and I agree with ALRO , the line about the obliviousness being an acquired skill is the best because it’s true!

Whoa! Sketchy dude on a subway! Slightly creepy, but still so brilliant!

Among your best, I think. Now I can’t get “Aqualung” out of my head.

Awesome.

The mix of descriptions and action is amazing.

I really liked it. Yeah, you do meet these types almost everywhere where I live…makes you think about yourself. : ) Great job.

leave it to you to come up with the strange and creepy character. very average subway riding folk, i must say…