Wow. This was tragic. Good job further developing Jeff/Death’s personality.
Oh, and you totally busted me. I finished reading The Book Thief in the wee hours of the night yesterday and I bawled my eyes out, scaring my cat. This inspired me, but I wanted to give it a more humorous edge, like Woody Allen’s portrayal of death in his writing and films.

Wow, Jeff really hates his job.. gut wrenching.. in keeping with Ana’s premise. wonderful job.

I think this follows really well! Great job! I still get that “human” feel from Jeff, and the girl speaking to him was just chilling! Awesome!

I like the heart that Jeff/Death has and it must have killed him not to be able to respond when she addressed him.