Very good. Not what I was expecting. I like it!!

Yep, that’s one surprise ending. You capitalized the second “she” in your last sentence by accident, but otherwise it’s perfection. Welcome to Ficlets, by the way! :)

Welcome, and nice twist! I hope you sequel with more! :)

Welcome to Ficlets! Loved the twist, I wasn’t expecting it. I’d love to see you continue this.

I think I will write a sequel, thanks for the comments. And thanks Ana, fixed that ’s’

Whoa!
love the ending.
perfectionnnnn!
=]

I give to you a sequel!

http://ficlets.com/stories/37999