This is my, “Train of thought, what would a serial killer think if he/she read the paper,” entry. :/

wow. Nice use of repetition to drive the point.
Thanks for entering!

wow this is incredible i hope they dont catch you. lol

I didn’t get it until you said serial killer, then it made sense. This serial killer seems lucid, and intelligent, not as unstable as I imagine one to be. Yet I’m sure this is not the case for all. :)

man bundy was elequent and verbose. That is the thing that made him so evil is that he was likable goodlooking and charasmatic

Creep, how logical he is. This is the most diabolically villainous entry I’ve read.

Er, I meant creepy, although “creep” works here, too. :p

I think a big mistake a lot of people make, is thinking that “killers” and “murderers,” especially the ones who rake up massive numbers (let’s say, even two, for example ;D) aren’t the obvious lunatics we want them to be. In spite of what movies would have us to believe, inevstigative statistics show the truth is that most serial killers test from borderline to above average intelligence and that very few are found legally “insane” when they go to trial.

Wow, this gave me the chills. Soo creepy… but I love it. Fantastic job.

I totally appreciate the story getting into the head of the killer. To write stuff like this, you really have to think like the villain; to be what we are not.
I think you did a great job showing us that.

… After reading the comments, I feel like I have to do this;
ahem..
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In my defense, I am not a serial killer, unless you count the day we fogged the house and on that day, I_ was almost among the dead. >:D I have played one for the Forensics class at the high school where I work, which made for a very interesting grading period (by the way, during the trial, I was found innocent by two classes and guilty by only one. _Only because of outside class speculation. And declared a mistrial. >;D)

I love the title of this, and the repetition of that line over and over. This is beyond creepy, this is bone-chilling.

Repetition does wonders!

I love the title, and that sentence does drive the point home.

Very creepy, and a very unique entry into this challenge!

Awesome!