Wow, that last pair of sentences gave me chills… Very well done. Great imagery.
One small edit: where you write “it’s own chord” and a couple of the other instances of the possessive pronoun “its,” you doesn’t need an apostrophe.

Thanks again. Fixed!

it’s like the pixar logo gone horribly wrong …very interesting,cuz i thought stephen speilberg was the one who gave that lamp life …