This was really cool! (pardon the pun)
i loved your imagery in this.

Lovely snapshot of someone’s thought process. And welcome back to ficleting! Woohoo!

Love the snippy dialog towards the overprotective male. And fabulous imagery! The lone house reminds me of a puzzle I have, so you know it is picturesque!

i, too, love the imagery you have in this. beautiful descriptions.
=]