I love the sense of hope in this. Beautifully written, pens.

Is there only one moment? Oh my! I hope it didn’t pass me by unnoticed! I love the don’t be afraid section and “you’ll get dirty”. People are nice, under the dirt. :)

I like the feeling… a general “Don’t give up” vibe.

Well done. Though, I hope paying attention isn’t really all that important. I’ve never been very good at it.
For some reason the first paragraph kind of reminded me of Richard Gere’s marriage proposal in “Runaway Bride.” Anyone else catch that or was it just me? Probably just me.