Comments on The Legend of Ã?hasêstse’ó Falls, Part 5 [Epic Poem Challenge] by ♠Ana Cristina♥

g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

What an epic! Absolutely beautiful, just gorgeous! (and in the nick of time too)
I’m glad I was a nudge, thanks for entering!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:38.
[ wall.doll ]

Oh. My. Goodness.
This is perhaps the most beautiful thing I’ve read of yours. I love it. I absolutely do. It really feels old and retold a thousand times. And I love the repetition of the actions of between the characters, it really adds something. Sort of like, even though they’re enemies, they all feel the same thing and it ties them together. Beautiful.
Bravo!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:38.
[ wall.doll ]

Oh. My. Goodness.
This is perhaps the most beautiful thing I’ve read of yours. I love it. I absolutely do. It really feels old and retold a thousand times. And I love the repetition of the actions of between the characters, it really adds something. Sort of like, even though they’re enemies, they all feel the same thing and it ties them together. Beautiful.
Bravo!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:39.
Mistress Elsha Hawk

very beautiful, I agree with wall doll, it sounds old and retold. wonderful job!
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:39.
RainDance

It’s like a twist on Romeo and Juliet. I give it a commendation for a poem that was beautifully written.
- Posted 2009-01-12 05:05:39.