wow this was like hunter s thompson and carl sanburg had a kid i like this you went all out thanks for entering ….even though this isnt my challenge lol
9.435 stars
and one of the most original things i have read all day

A very down-to-earth, real, and well-written dream. the juxtaposition of ocean and sun, to snow and winter paint a picture of real longing. :)

Lovely style to it, and tells a lot without telling to much. Stuck in French Canada, maybe? I’d prefer California too.