Whoa. It isn’t yours anyway, she thought.
The last line is awesome. I wonder …

@ Freedom: I agree that last line was awesome. And m I understanding right? Dévon is her father in law’s brother???? Oh my goodness.
And she has a name! Hooray!

Is this story too getting too weird? Constructive criticism is much appreciated on this one…

too wierd? that is like saying def leopard has an awesomeness problem pour some sugar on that!! lol i crack me up sometimes lol

well deaf leopard sux and you have had a crack problem so , you know just like live with sugar in your panties and get back to me on how ‘kewl’ or sexy pouring sugar on one can be , also the story is weird and good and you know even human on human relationships get real complicated(in the south) so , you know , don’t worry about bveing too weird….That would be damn near impossible around this joint (excluding bestiality, we all have agreed that is too weird) also venture bros. has started so i gotta go…

i have never smoked CRACK oh wait you meant the other crack huh

im confused o_o

just teasing with chaka i really dont do drugs she is just crazy like that wait or am i the crazy one? i get confused lol