WHOA .
That’s … all I can say :]

this poem ran away with the circus! lol! intersting how you went from scissors to broken bottles, to pay phones, drunken circus bums…a wild ride!

Wow. Very cool!
I had to read it twice to get the full sense of it!
It seemed to me it was about the struggle to live?
Or something like that… I’m known as getting to perceptive and seeing things that aren’t there!

Still, deeper meaning aside, I liked this a lot!

you definitely took this a lot of places =].
i particularly lovee the first line!
=]

Brilliant, slightly twisted, and far from sane. It gives a dark sense life, real life. Excellent.

Amazing. It went from subject to subject without breaking the flow. This is really good, it should be the featured ficlet.
5Stars.

Great job on loose associations that are just outside the expected but still make some cohesive sense.

Wow. Deep. Very deep. And authentic, for sure.

its weird that the stuff i write, and totally think is worthless…is the stuff everyone likes.

worthless stuff is the beginning of all writers who gain a wide audience… “normal” stuff won’t get you anywhere … take it from a (semi) pro …

that much is true.

that much is true.