interesting view of her life. i think you should “snob” her up a bit though. make her a little more desperate, itf she’s going to a therapist, she obviously has issues. she could have a “i’m greater than thou” attitude.

really play that up.

interesting view of her life. i think you should “snob” her up a bit though. make her a little more desperate, itf she’s going to a therapist, she obviously has issues. she could have a “i’m greater than thou” attitude.

really play that up.

nice backstory, yeah she could be more snobby, and she’s supposed to be a knock-out blonde too, so she’s definitely full of herself…

haha! Sounds like a wanna-be actress! These two characters are set up for a collision of fate, if I’m not mistaken.

Great start, the last sentence is great.