It continues to be very gripping. Very good.

Nice! Great story setup! Blessedly clean writing (a breath of fresh air indeed). Definitely has me wanting you to write more.

“I’ve seen Law & Order.” Kind of sums up how most of America has any knowledge of the judicial system and police work, for better or worse.

Great banter! I like how the teens argue but the one never leaves! If his brother is involved, he wants to be there to see it too!