run! I’m sure the other is faster though, and epic battle will ensue! (I hope so anyway)

The organization of your paragraphs here is fantastic. It gives it a disjointed, fragmented feel that works well with the scene.

Thank you for the kind words, Ana. And thanks for dropping by my web site as well.

Very intense, very emotional feel to it all.

I agree with everything else that’s been said. Hey, I don’t wanna be a broken record!… oken record!… oken record!