Very deep
Very beautiful

Absolutely brilliant.
Lovely rhymes, beautiful message.
Exceptional work.

I’m glad it had a happy ending, it kind of gets depressing at the middle :P I like the rhyme and meter, and the message, too!

Great flow and meter in this poem. It’s not often you turn to verse in your writing, so this was a nice departure. :)

I love this. It’s really cool to see you doing a poem of sorts, and I love the concept.

I liked your poem
It made me think of childhood
I remembered things