hey i wrote this. i don’t like it all that much, but i can’t put my finger on as to why. So if you are in the same boat as me and dislike it too some constructive critisism and if anyone know how to spell critisism drop a note too!

I actually like it. I kind of get it in a way but don’t know how to explain it…odd.

I like it, I really do! I understand it, too [= Good job