hahahaha that was a riot. Probably treat his girlfriend a lot better now. Great ficlet.

That’s awesome! I like how it’s not just one gender playing out all the actions of the previous ficlet, but you mixed it up.

A great change of point of view. Great fantasy this guy has … hehehe..
This brought a whole new twist to our “Groundhog Day” story.

Awesome job.

Impressive use of the conditional tense (I think that’s the right term) for a great comedic effect. At first it seems figurative, then gradually becomes more and more literal. Great job!

awesome comic book spin! Way to change the POV and make it work! that’s right boys, appreciate your gf! lol

spectacular reference to the big green guy (girl? lol) I was waiting for someone to change the point of view on this baby ;)

nice “other side of the story”