Wow. Beautiful descriptions (although I wasn’t quite sure what happened, exactly… that may be on account I’m half punch-drunk from a long day. I’m sure that if I reread it I’ll get it the second time around.)

Actually, this one is intended to be a little vague, very much in the moment of this scared, little girl’s perception of the world.

yeah I have a feeling her arrival in the “real world” will upset a few things. ;)

This one has a very poetic feel to it. I would agree it was a bit vague, but not in a bad way…

I love how you use similes and metaphors to give such vast descriptions in small amounts of words. Lovely.

I like how every ficlet in this series resembles a poem..It has an effortless poetic flow to it.

I do believe this is one of my favorites in this series so far’