Ugh…this didn’t quite turn out the way I wanted it to. I tried to write this in a several stanza haiku format, but I’m not sure how effective this was.

I love this picture- and the ficlet you wrote about it.
I like the contrasting points in parts of it
Vulnerable, hurt – yet strong
and
_Screaming, wounding, yet dancing _

Also I thought the repetition of verse 1 and the end was a nice touch. Added some circular motion to it.

Not sure about the Haiku format, to be honest I don’t even remember what makes a Haiku exactly, so I can’t help you there.
LoA

don’t we all feel like that? if only i could read this every day….