this is sad, and beautiful. I adore your work. keep on writing. I can’t wait to read more.

Very nice. A couple typos however. Third sentence should be ‘our’ and in the last paragraph it should be ‘awoke’

Beautiful, that’s all I can say. Keep it up, you are very talented!

sad and beautiful. gave me goosebumps. love it.

i totally agree with all that was said above.

Absolutely beautiful.
Enough said.

Stunning story, I loved the sentence I named a girl after you; it was hard for my wife to accept. Never stop writing.