I don’t know if this was a very good sequel… I really need to work on my writing..

hahaha. I like the line about Pete. Who is pete anyway? Saint Peter? I dunno.
Anyway, can’t wait for the sequel!
(you might want to rethink the use of the word ‘simply’ before the mysterious man’s reply… it doesn’t seem to be quite the right adj. but that’s just me)
LoA

i like it, very suspenseful!

Racing, don’t worry this is a great sequel. Very suspenseful like band geek said. Its nicely written, you throw in a joke to keep it light even tho this is a very serious situation, and you provide us with some info about the plot. We now know there is some type of supreme boss that gives orders and has some master plan.