Wow. That’s like all I can say: W-O-W.
I do love this line though. Fate flicked her fickle finger through the void. Awesome job!

only because there is something funny, yet disturbing about a grown person pooping their pants, I chuckle. really it is immature of me.. and I shouldn’t…

Wow… this is really interesting… I wonder what’ll happen to poor Rob (I have to wonder because I haven’t torn the fabric of time and space for all to see)

Holy alliteration! “Fate flicked her fickle finger”… good phrase.

Absolutely wonderful. I love it. I think we’d all crap our pants. Great entry. Thanks.

caught a type:

spew when into -> spew went into

funny sequel.

ew.
but good.
but ew.