This was just ok for me until the end. The end was good! It gets the mind turning as to how you do just that!!

I liked this – has a similar “geist” to my last ficlet. Looks like we’re on the same wavelength or something………

I like this too. I see you went for the strong opening line. It definitely gets the attention. But then it’s more rounded, as it matches it with the twise at the end.

sorry, twist (obviously)

Marvelous.