interesting concept, but little predictible. i kind of like the informal tone, but could be improved.

I guess that’s what I get for dreaming up a story from a dream.

I liked it, but then again, I like anything that has to do with WWII or the Holocaust. I agree with Khepa, but there were some moments of genius in here.

that was an interesting take on things, but you might want to fix up some of the grammar to make it a little more clear. real good concept, though

I like it! Very cool perspective.