Oooo. I like this a lot! So specific, yet so infinite. Keep it going!

A teriffic start to a great sci-fi yarn! It inspired me to add my own bit to yours.

Oh! That was so cool! Eerie and intriguing, I thought my eyes were going to pop out of my head. You had me hanging on every word.

Very nice. I like the directness; it makes the reader want to listen for this sound early in the morning.

this kills (in a good way)