But still, there was another part of her that knew she wasn’t crazy…I mean, she’s got a bajillion chickens at her house! watch out for tense changes like this. instead of “i mean” you could have said “honestly” or something else to avoid it

great story, but i think that you spelled psychiatrist wrong.

Psychiatrist?? You spelled it the same way xxniharikaxx spelled it and they said you spelled it wrong!!! Who cares?! The story’s great! I’ve created a monster here….

I like the twist that her mom had it as well.

w8, so her mom was a chicken queen, or she’s told the psychiatrist about becky?

Both.