holy god you are talented.

i absolutely love it. the pages being similized (is that a word?) with her and him, in the form of ink (black words), tainting her being.

can’t even explain the awesomeness.. keep it up PF!!

Wow wonderfully written like always. I love the “They spread out over the water at first, like a film of tainted love” sentence. Beautiful discription

i like your use of repition, as well as the symbolism (i believe that’s the word SS was looking for, correct me if im wrong)

your writing is so captivating. i feel strangled by greatness.