better. i like it. i would give it four and a half stars (cuz im still not getting the teddy’s date-ty’s date-ken said paragraph—but im stupid. probly ill read it again after this, get it, and change my rating :P lol) but i cant.

awesome. as always.

yea that whole paragraph doesnt make sense but you kinda gotta roll with it. u kno?

oh what’s gonna happen????

yea yea i dont get the paragraph but WRITE A SEQUEL BEFORE I HAVE NIGHTMARES ABOUT THIS OKAY ?

lol i don’t know how u all didn’t get it.. but surprisingly… i got it : ]

It’s very awkwardly written.
My only thought was that Ty’s cell phone evidently doesn’t have caller ID.