wait a minute, what are they into, lol…very good story, I look forward to the next part. :)

woah…what? nice ending. are you gonna do a sequel? or leave us on the edge of our seats?

Hm… I was going to just end it here. D’you think I should continue?

Or someone else can of course. :)

This is good, you should write more.

very good story, you should definitely write more.

very good story, you should definitely write more.