This is good. I didn’t look at the tags for the story, so the vampire thing threw me for a loop! But it needs to keep going. It may even need a prequel.

Vampire thing threw me too, but I liked it. I do wonder about how they met, and why they’ve stayed together. I’m such a fan of Buffy, though, that if I wrote anything it’d probably be oddly familiar . . .
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I do wonder if the vamp here has signed the Treaty that Stovohobo speaks of.

Hmm…..should I make the vampire thing more obvious? I kind of made it subtle on purpose but…I guess in this case that’s not a good thing?
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Treaty? What treaty? Guess I’ll have to find out =)