chocolate factory huh. old charlie is off his rocker now. too many sweets. great story.

Oh, that’s where I’ve heard of Knids! Nicely done, picking up the allusion.

The allusion still eludes me (I get where it’s from, but I still can’t place it). This is great though.

hehehe. love how this turned out.

Totally loving this.

xDD this is one crazy story! I love it =) Makes me want to read Charlie and the Glass Elevator again

I love knowing what happened to Charlie when he got old. (I can’t remember the Knids for anything, but I do remember Wonka.) The title was another classic.